"A very moving play, extremely well written. There wasn't a dry eye in the house". Karen Woodland, NDFA
‘Shelter’ is set in Manchester during the blitz. Will and Mary, a First World War Veteran and his much younger wife, respond to the air raid siren and enter into the Anderson shelter at the bottom of their garden.
It is clear that there is tension between them; Mary is trying to make conversation and Will is not responding very much as he cleans his shoes. They begin to argue. Mary feels resented by Will for what has happened to their son, Charlie. Will says he does not resent her but he just has nothing to say to her. Will remains closed off to Mary. She tries to talk about happier times but Will, whilst slightly more responsive, is still quiet and shut down. Mary, pleading with Will to talk about Charlie rests her hand on his shoulder. Will flinches and moves away, pleading with her to stop talking about him.
Will begins to talk through his experiences in the First World War. These are stories that Mary has never heard. He explains how he felt lifeless after coming home from the war but that Mary and Charlie brought him back to life. He talks about how he wanted to protect Charlie from all sorrows and pain by enjoying the little things throughout his childhood such as birdsong or painting, but that the Second World War had loomed and he had not been able to “shelter” the now teenage Charlie from it. He goes into detail as to how he tried to get Charlie to register as a conscientious objector by going through a trial. He had even written the words for Charlie’s statement to help him accomplish this. He believed this would stop Charlie having to go to the front line. However, Will then insinuates that Mary has something to do with Charlie being sent away.
Mary, feeling the weight of guilt and sorrow, explains that when she was a teenager during the First World War, she had been with her father on the bus one day when a woman had handed her father a white feather – a symbol of cowardice. She had pushed this woman and had screamed that her father was deaf and was, therefore, unable to fight. Her father had then committed suicide from the societal pressure of not being able to fight due to an unseen disability.
She explains that Charlie had approached Mary to say he wanted to fight and didn’t want anyone to think him a coward. Mary had told Charlie to write a letter explaining to Will that he wanted to fight for his country and that this is why he would not be registering as a conscientious objector. Mary explains that Charlie didn’t know how to tell his father about his intentions because Will “took over”. Mary says that once the letter was written and Will was waiting at the trial, she took Charlie to the train and waved him off as he went to join the fight.
Will says that he has never heard any of this and that he understands more as to why Charlie went to fight and why Mary “betrayed” him. Will then tries to make things better with Mary by talking about the day Charlie was born and they both share a joke about Charlie nearly being named after the doctor.
The play ends with Mary and Will holding each other promising to stand by each other in their unbearable grief at losing their one joy, their son, Charlie.
All three characters have tried to shelter one another from a situation that is, ultimately, out of their control. Can Mary and Will rebuild their marriage amidst the crumbling debris of war?
1m, 1f
- Will: Acting age 55. He is a First World War veteran who is traumatised by his experiences in France. He is quiet and although he doesn’t feel he is good with words, he is actually very poetic. He has low self-esteem and doesn’t consider himself of much value. He has rebuilt his life and has had a happy marriage up till now but his ultimate joy, Charlie, has been “stolen” from him by one of the only people he loves and trusts. The actor must be able show all “corners” of Will’s personality – he is an emotional, sensitive person in a society that only tolerates the “stiff upper lip” mentality. He is a gentle but tortured soul.
- Mary: Acting age 42. She is the younger wife of Will who was a teenager through the First World War and has traumas of her own from that time. Mary loves Will very deeply and can’t bear for him to resent her. The actress must be able to show colliding feelings of guilt, pride, sorrow and anxiety. She is outwardly strong but she’s tired of being strong and she needs someone to lean on and comfort her. She’s defensive but carries crippling loneliness and the fear of being rejected. She is at her wit’s end.
Ultimately, they cannot shelter each other from the truth; they could not have saved Charlie from this war.
Winner - Derek Jacobi Playwriting Competition 2024/25
Winner Best Play and Best Actor - MADFs Isle of Man Easter Festival of Plays
“This short play has a satisfying shape and gives a vivid picture of a couple battling their own individual hitherto unspoken conflicts.” stated the judging panel. “Their initial dialogue has the right taut and fractured edge…the quite touching final moments just avoid teetering over the edge into sentimentality. The beautifully drawn characters have an inner honesty and their strained relationship is very believable". The Derek Jacobi Playwrighting Award Judging Panel
"‘Shelter’ is a touching, poignant, beautifully-written play, with understated and sensitive performances by Jenny and Simon. It touched many hearts when performed at the National Drama Festival earlier this year and is a very worthy winner of the Derek Jacobi Playwriting award". National Drama Festivals Association
“Had the great pleasure and privilege yesterday of seeing the superb one act play ‘Shelter’ by Jenny Derbyshire at the National Drama Festival at the Artrix Studio in Bromsgrove. Superbly written, fabulously performed and engaging from start to finish. It was a timeless and beautifully moving story of a relationship shattered by the harsh reality of life and their desperate attempts to find solace in each other’s company. Heart-breaking and heart-warming at the same time, a truly beautiful,
beautiful play.” Alan Groucott
“Jenny clearly has a creative mind and an exceptional ability when it comes to storytelling. The cast of two did very well to bring this dark and moving piece to life on stage Simon Fletcher’s exceptional use of the voice and physical presence shows his anxiety. Jenny Derbyshire matched her fellow cast members' performance by showing her love and care for him by listening, engaging and showing her love
by reaching out to him when he was broken. Both performers were dressed in fitting period clothing and nailed the Mancunian accent. Congratulations to all on this production's first performance on stage". Oliver Sykes, Reviewer for MADF
"A very moving play, extremely well written. There wasn't a dry eye in the house". Karen Woodland, NDFA