Note for amateur companies from Tim Luscombe
I wrote this adaptation specifically for Salisbury Playhouse at a time of economic uncertainty and cutbacks in arts funding. I was commissioned to get Austen’s novel on to the stage using no more than ten actors, which, considering the frugality of the times,
was pretty generous! Using this obstacle as an opportunity, the cast was constructed to employ six women and four men. You could argue that much of the doubling I suggested for the first production makes artistic sense. For instance, Mary Musgrove and Mrs Smith is a nice double. Both deal with ill health – Mary’s is imagined and she copes badly, while Mrs Smith’s is all too real and she copes well. I also thought it was interesting to have two of
Anne’s suitors (Benwick and Mr Elliot) played by the same actor. This whole arrangement was the best I could do, making sure the appropriate characters tell the story, while maintaining the minimum amount of changes, and presenting transformations that are readable from the audience’s point of view.
However, if your company has the opportunity to open the play up to a larger group of actors, then there is scope here to use anything up to 23 people. If you wanted to make the street scenes particularly spectacular, you could use even more bodies!
However, ten would seem to be the minimum necessary for a successful production.
For those of you who know and care about these things, you’ll notice that I’ve re-christened Charles Hayter (to avoid confusion with all the other Charles in the story!). He’s now Joseph Hayter. I’ve given Mrs Smith a first name, Henrietta. And I’ve lost a
Musgrove daughter.
The challenges that the play presents, in terms of production, aren’t enormous, but some do exist. There’s a fair amount of dancing. There’s even a bit of singing. And there’s a rainstorm. The text suggests a piano here and there. Might it be good to have
it on all the time? And Louisa has to have something by way of a Cobb to fall off. In the script, I could suggest recycling the Harville’s dining table, but I’m sure there are a million ways to do a Cobb. The other thing to spend energy on getting right is costume. Especially if you’re working with a cast of ten. Any permutation that reduces the novel to a cast of that size is going to lean heavily on a clever and witty costume design. If you’re working with doubling/trebling etc., you’ll see that whenever an actor has to change character, I’ve given him or her a reasonable time offstage in which to do it. For example, they’re rationally written out of a scene early if they’re on in the next scene as a new character etc.
I hope that the amount of music suggested in the text might lead a director to imagine asking for even more in a production, to support the emotional topography. I sense music could be used quite filmically. But that’s just an idea.
The scenes should run into each other as much as possible, to keep the pace up. Stage directions indicate where the action mustn’t stop at all. And generally, long scene changes are the enemy. This might imply a lack of emphasis on great clunky sets
and furniture, and more importance placed on more gestural, fluid settings – with sound helping a lot.
It would be useful if the actress playing Anne can play the piano, although I suppose there are always means of disguising it if she can’t. The same for the actress who plays Lady Dalrymple. In the current character/actor arrangement, the Admiral Croft/ Mr
Harville actor needs to be able to sing.
The song in the Concert scene in Act Two was inserted so that Anne has time to change from wet to dry (from the Rain scenes to the Concert scene). However, if your production doesn’t render rain literally, then the song could be cut right down, or even eliminated.
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